In Week 7, we looked at an example of a piece of writing that was inspired by a picture. The writing had lots of personification in it. Then we had to look at 6 different pictures and choose one that we thought might inspire some personification ideas. I chose to use this picture because it inspired me.
Here is my writing I hope you enjoy.
You have done really well with your personification sentences Andrew, because the non-human nouns you have chosen to personify actually do look like they are doing the verbs which you use. I probably would have used all past tense verbs in each sentence; then you would have the pattern: hunted, raced, played. What do you think?
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