Animal Town

This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter
and then we had to carry on the story.

What I like about my writing is week was that I could write about the animal I was. .

I need to improve on getting spelling correct.

Here is my writing about Animal Town.

In Animal town I am the King of all the animals because I am a lion and lions
are king. I tell everyone what to do and every animal is under my command.

I am rich and I have more gold than everyone. I get furious if an animal     
doesn't do as I say. They’ll get kicked out of animal town. My big strong
animals guard my castle so that no one comes into my castle.